I need help with my English? PLEASE??

Question by Little red riding hood: I need help with my English? PLEASE??
Please help check if there are any grammar, spelling or phrases mistakes, I would really appreciate that cause this is really important to me. (just do something to make my story better) here:If you think you have spent the day profitably and want to take a rest, then why not go to the Love River to take a walk? When I was born, the Love River is still an unnoticeable sticky ditch, but now, it’s completely different. Not only the Love River is much beautiful than before, it also make Kaohsiung more colorful. You can hear the pleasant sound of musical instrument playing while tasting the delicious coffee along the riverside. Not only that, when you’re taking a walk, you might found out artists are busy helping passerbies to paint or some innocent little children picking flowers from the ground. This beautiful scene can appear more about Kaohsiung people’s temperament and enthusiasm.

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Answer by Alba the Scot
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If you think you have spent the day profitably, and want to take a rest, then why not go to the Love River to take a walk? When I was born, the Love River was still an unnoticeable sticky ditch, but now it’s completely different. Not only is the Love River more beautiful than before, it also makes Kaohsiung more colorful. You can hear the pleasant sound of musical instruments playing while tasting the delicious coffee along the riverside. Not only that, when you’re taking a walk, you might find artists that are busy helping passer-by’s to paint, or some innocent little children picking flowers from the ground. This beautiful scene can say more about Kaohsiung peoples’ temperament and enthusiasm.

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Please rank the English proficiency for the following paragraphs from 1 to 10. Thanks?

Question by Hard-Worker: Please rank the English proficiency for the following paragraphs from 1 to 10. Thanks?
Dear XXX:
Typhoon Kalmaegi engulfed eastern and northern parts of Taiwan since Thursday evening, Due to safety concerns, local officials have announced regional non-working day for Friday (18-July) in Taichung county and city.

Due to this, we apologize if you are not attended to. If you shall have any urgent questions or problems, please contact your windows directly, they we shall try best to support you from home !

Best regard
Hank

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Answer by amybeader
Maybe a 5. While in general the English is understandable, there is poor grammar structure and some of the word usages are unclear, for example the phrase “please contact your windows directly” makes no sense.

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I need some information about Taiwan travel (south Taiwan)? Please give some suggestion~?

Question by alien: I need some information about Taiwan travel (south Taiwan)? Please give some suggestion~?
We have a travel planning to Taiwan, most travel information we found are about Taipei, but we are interested with the new metro system in Kaohsiung, so trying to get some advise of transportation and hotel of south Taiwan. We will start our Taiwan trip from Taipei, then down to the south by train or their high speed rail, many thanks!

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Answer by Tim Fishman
I know their tourism bureau offers tourism bus with several routes, including south Taiwan, they have web site and the itinerary covers trip to Kenting, maybe you can put into your planning, Kenting is popular for lots of water activities and great sea views.
http://www.taiwantourbus.com.tw/english/products_list.php

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translate please! Pang ilan presidente si Corazon C. Aquino?

Question by Doc Dex: translate please! Pang ilan presidente si Corazon C. Aquino?

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Answer by kevin080592
READ THIS!

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AubkT5MJQaxxLoSky72FTm_ty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090329213405AAAtpTw

NOTE: just change Gloria arroyo to cory aquino….and btw im not really filipino american ;p

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please give me the telephone number of police detention center of Ilan county?

Question by MIla M: please give me the telephone number of police detention center of Ilan county?
and also if you can tell me how to go there by train … i need to visit my friend .. shes an illegal and caugth by the police … and she is there …..

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Answer by TaiwanTeacher
Yilan county police bureau
No.167,Sec.2,Jhongshan Rd.,Yilan City,Yilan County 260,Taiwan(R.O.C.)
Tel?(886)-3-9325147?Fax?(886)-3-9356382
E-Mail?t000@imail.ilcpb.gov.tw?Office Hours?08:00~17:30

Go to Taipei Main Station. Take a “northbound” train to Yi-lan (??), they leave about every half hour or so.

If you need to take a Taxi from the Yilan station, here’s the address in Chinese:

????????????2?167? ????

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